*WHERE DID WE GO WRONG*

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    *WHERE DID WE GO WRONG*

    As I sit back and think about life I worry, not because of the love I have but because of the friend I’m losing. Am I not your soul mate? Did God not create you for me? I am confused and dazed, thoughts of your touch, your smell, and the way you always made me feel special consume my head, when were together it seems as if no one else exist. Now I ponder at the thought of you drenching another with the pleasure and love you once bestowed upon me or should I say the lust you bestowed upon me. Where did we go wrong? And what happened to what we had? Was it just fantasy on my part, or just the desire of me wanting to be with you so badly that my mind became clouded with imaginary thoughts of you and me, when in reality I was nothing more to you than pleasurable sex? It makes me wonder: am I not worth more to you? Did you ever feel anything for me? Or are you too afraid to humble yourself and speak your true feelings? Maybe it was all just an illusion of what I wanted, felt, or thought I deserved? I miss your touch and your warm embrace. Where did we go wrong and how can we make it right? My days are now spent cleansing my mind and trying not to focus on the bad things we went through but trying to work on getting back what we lost. But time works miracles, it gives us strength and courage to move on and forget, it helps our hurts heal and heals the pain caused by our hurts. So I will no longer rack my brain about things that are beyond my control instead I’ll smile, remember the good times, and thank God for what I do have.



    Written by Tanisha K. 1/08

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    optimistic commented on *WHERE DID WE GO WRONG*

    07-22-2009

    Definetly times of illusion when it comes to a relationship, it feels like the never ending cycle on the toture of love very well put I would imagine if its meant to be then that is exatcly what it is.
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    poet4dasoul commented on *WHERE DID WE GO WRONG*

    07-22-2009

    You know, sometimes it's not even about right or wrong it's just life and the way things happen. Sometimes we focus on the right and wrong aspects of things that happen to us and really it's just the way it was supposed to be. It might seem wrong one second and then another second we're glad it happened because it set pace for the right things to take place in our lives. Beyond blessed is a divine statement that peels back the essence of control, and it allows things to flow as they should be; without thinking about right or wrong. You know how we say it is what it is, and that's that. Sometimes we seek ultimate control over something we think we possess; but the bottom line is that nothing is ours forever, and ppl that live like that are always the most frontingest, emptiest ppl alive because when things are out of their control they lose confidence. They aren't thankful unless it's their way, but when their all alone is when they reflect on how they should have let live what was alive. Self control is the only way to have complete love because without it we'll always be trying to love a runaway.
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    patlee commented on *WHERE DID WE GO WRONG*

    07-04-2009

    I feel you on this i can relate to 95% of what you wrote here.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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