Where were you?

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  • Jaimie
  • is sorry for not being on more. once i get settled in my new house i should have more time.

Where were you?

Where were you?
In my darkest hour.
When I needed you the most?

Where were you?
When I was in the pits of depression?
When I felt like I was drowning?

Where were you?
When I was crying myself to sleep?
When I need someone to
hold me and tell me
I would be ok?

Where were you?
When I needed someone
to tell me they loved me?
When I needed someone to help
put my heart back together?

Where were you?
Mom,
Where were you?

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hisyanna commented on Where were you?

06-30-2009

wow this was awesome...i love love love poems i can relate 2!

TheAngelOfDeath commented on Where were you?

06-30-2009

Wow and you said you sucked BULL SHIT@!! this a a great poem and the ending.. you can tell that this is a heart felt peace of poetry... 10 from me. :)

BDIsernhagen commented on Where were you?

06-30-2009

ouch. I can see you bleeding tears here, soaking yourself in a puddle of agony. Its a bit to personal, but proabbly because I cannot really relate. thank you for sharing!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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