where you going

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    I wrote this for my one true love.

    where you going

     where you going baby?
    Don't leave me baby!
    Your eyes are so blue!
    My love is so true!
    Don't break my heart apart.

    Be with me forever baby!
    Don't ever say maybe!
    Maybe we can have a baby!
    I love you baby!
    We can have a brand new day!

    Let me know you love me baby!
    We can look at the morning sunrise
    and the ocean so salty baby.
    I really love you baby.
    You're my everything!

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    Worthless commented on where you going

    05-20-2010

    This one's alright too. But I hope you know exactly what your feeling and I hope you know it ain't right to bring a child into this world if your on drugs. That should be your first priority is to get off drugs and stay off drugs.
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    NenaT commented on where you going

    08-08-2009

    This could be a rock song, baby....Lol...did it impress your true love?
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    masterpoet

    08/09/2009

    in the key of h minor

    Oblaidon commented on where you going

    07-31-2009

    Well it rhymes..................................................
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    masterpoet

    08/01/2009

    Thank you for liking my poems. I try to make them rhyme because rhyming is important in poems! This is a luv poem about my baby!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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