WHERE

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    WHERE

     DAYS HAS PASSED SLEEP HAS BEEN LOST THOUGHTS OF A TROUBLED MIND APPEAR
     
    AWARE OF THE SITUATION I'M OUT OF CONTROL AND MY ANSWERS AREN'T VERY CLEAR

    NIGHTS ARE DAYS AND DAYS ARE WEEKS WHOSE COUNTING MY CONCISE NOW SPEAKS

     I WATCH MYSELF FALL OUT OF MY ELEMENT AND MY FEELINGS TURN TO DUST

    A MONTH AGO I WAS ON TOP OF THE WORLD POWERFUL WELL     RESPECTED NOT A WORRIED TYPE YA SEE

    I WOKE UP ONE DAY AND DIDN'T LIKE WHAT WAS IN FRONT OF  ME

    I WAS OVER LOOKING ALL THE FLAWS SO HE WOULD LOOK LIKE I CLAIMED HIM TO BE

    CARING HARDWORKING AND HONEST WAS WHAT I PROCLAIMED HE WAS CAUSE HE WAS ON MY TEAM

    A COMPULSIVE LIAR EXCELLENT LOVER WHO ALWAYS SOLD ME A DREAM BUT I OVER LOOK IT CAUSE I DIDN'T WANNA SEEM TO MEAN

    BUT I'LL BE OKAY AND MOVE ON I"LL FIND SOMEONE HONEST HARDWORKING IF ONLY YOU JUST TELL ME WHERE.

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    SILKYTWEED commented on WHERE

    07-06-2009

    Nice Write (smile)....very well put down, I can feel and sense the emotion I believe as this was written, at least that is the way it comes across...thanks for sharing!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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