Who am I?

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    Who am I?

    Who am I? Just a man with years of scratches and wrinkles in my hands
    Remolding the pot with clay and tears that mysteriously held my plans
    Feeling reminisces of a star, rolling like a high-powered car
    Speeding out of control threatening to roll destined not to get far from who I am
    “Who am I?”
    Just a man with pride, which was swallowed but not killed
    Anger filled and strong willed “Only to God have I kneeled”
    But even then I looked up which is the only way when you’re down
    In a dark room I sat with only the sounds of large buildings falling down
    To the ground pounding the valley inside my chest
    Taking my breath away as I try to rest for the next test of who I am
    “Who am I?”
    Just a victim of circumstances, one leaf in a whole pot of greens
    The temple of coincidental happenstance echoed by a warriors scream
    Of war and peace, of joy and pain,
    Of love and hate, a soldier’s aim
    Hoping for a victorious conquest just a man who has given a mediocre attempt at his best
    But still blessed to be who I am
    “Who am I?”
    I am the he of the them, the him of the they
    I am the tip of the limb, the reason I pray
    I am the light of day the dark of night
    I am the hopes and dreams of an endless fight
    I am the result of a mistake and part of the plan
    I am a beautiful attempt at the image of God, just a man
    I am who I am and what I am
    Simply because I am yes, I am
    “Who am I?”

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Who am I?

    05-05-2009

    u impress me more everytime i tune into you and read. this was awsome.

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Who am I?

    04-29-2009

    I love the ending Great poem..Oh and sorry if my comments seem short i normally only get 10 minutes on the comuter every hour lol

    fennesse commented on Who am I?

    04-21-2009

    Beautiful way of expressing and sharing your most bold and honest quest for self, yet in the end revealing that you've become fully aware of who you are, a most powerful piece yes

    Glendaly commented on Who am I?

    04-15-2009

    I love this... especially the end... you are very talented

    dangedmanjr commented on Who am I?

    03-25-2009

    wonderful flow...

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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