who to be

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    who to be
    I am not who I want to be

    I do not feel like me



    I‘ve been molded by society

    and the rules are controlling me

    I’ve not been who I want to be

    I wish I knew what I want for me



    I want more determination

    but I wonder if within the duration

    of the rest of the time I have left

    will I be me or will death take my life by theft



    I may change my life one day

    and maybe then I will know what to say

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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