Winds

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for my husband,,,,,

Winds

how i beg the winds to blow away from me
for every gust of wind that comes across
me reminds me of him....
the one i long for !! the one i yearn for!
i stand alone in this human cross of mine
and wonder how much i can possibly
stand this impossible torture.....
i let the winds erode my inside emotion!
i keep hopin to hold on to your lingering
touch...
i want  your lingerin love to burn inside
me!
heavens above....
keep this wind from me!!!!

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mustascheman commented on Winds

10-12-2010

It's one thing to be reminded of someone by a gentle breeze and quite another to be reminded of them by someone breaking wind!! (LOL) You know what is said.'time heals all....' Good Job. A.T.

Sx9 commented on Winds

10-11-2010

now its there now its not,,yes love the feeling and emotion that cover our soul is what make up strive,and so we all want a piece of the wind,,sometime one way or the other,,love this vibes bad,,

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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