Wishing to be Loved...

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    • has faith that my love shall endure throughout time. :)

    Wishing to be Loved...
    Wishing To Be Loved

    Take me as I am

    For I will undoubtedly

    Be eternally yours

    Love me as if you have

    loved no other before

    And I will make you

    The center of my universe.

    Show me the way to your heart

    As I will guide you

    Through mine

    Entrust me with the key

    To your love

    And I will humbly exchange

    mine for yours.

    As long as you treasure

    my heart

    You can be sure that

    your heart is mine

    And both our hearts

    Are melted into

    One.

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    soulwriter commented on Wishing to be Loved...

    09-07-2009

    Flowing from your soul is a strong love that is a special affection that forms a relationship that not all are blessed to know... Thank you allowing the reader to listen in!!
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    AvantGarde87 commented on Wishing to be Loved...

    09-06-2009

    The message of this poem is great! It seems really personal yet something everyone can relate to, the process of romantic love. Your form is also very good.
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    LoneAngel

    09/07/2009

    This poem came about pinning for the love of unrequited first love in my life, just food for thought.

    raymond2164 commented on Wishing to be Loved...

    09-01-2009

    i like your poems.u have a talent.how long have u been writting.
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    LoneAngel

    09/01/2009

    I've been writing on and off since high school, my sophmore year when I joined our school's literary magazine called Vernissage. I always try to write when my heart wishes to express itself and explodes in a current of feeling that refuses to be contained, but wishes to be heard for all to hear. :)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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