without knowing
When you see
surely say how beautiful,
with full of flowers
and newly formed leaves.
But nobody know,
yesterday while
replanting all my
roots are lost.
without knowing
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Musicmynded1 commented on without knowing
08-25-2010
- very nice work piece here ma friend.........................................:)
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Sydney commented on without knowing
03-02-2010
- wow, yet mysterious and short. this is a good one. feels like the character is phsyching as if angry. Sydney
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lonewolf commented on without knowing
03-02-2010
- good poem, though a little short. ........... all in all, a good poem
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kpeery09 commented on without knowing
03-02-2010
- Very Nice, its short and sweet, keep up the good work.
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