Wonderland State of Mind

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    • lilvicki
    • Visually seen as my mind wants it to appear!!

    Wonderland State of Mind

     My Words are twisted like lyrical mazes,
    Twisting and tricking my mind to unimaginable
    places, Wonderland my state of mind, Sipping
    Tea with unfamilliar faces,
    My words are twisted like lyrical mazes,
    Phrases twisted into unforgettable mazes,
    faces unseen unravel unfamilliar faces,
    Fantasy and Reality all merged into one
    My wonderland state of mind
    lost in unimaginable places, crazy lyrical phrases,
    unravel all of these places, Words twisted like 
    lyrical mazes,  in my wonderland state of mind
    making the unimaginable, imaginable!!

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    klassik commented on Wonderland State of Mind

    01-08-2010

    first of all I love the title! this is a very nice and fun piece, nice write!
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    lilvicki

    01/11/2010

    Thank You Vry Much......

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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