World within a world

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an old piece i found under the dust.

Wednesday, November 1, 2006

World within a world

it all started madd Yaku
grafting to the bubonic flu
eyes became blue
for indians it was poison in the stew
Vatican Illuminati business with the jew
the steps i conquere remain til 3002
this you catch electric shock
leaving bodily marks
 
sell parts, rip out your heart
without penetrating your skin
channel thru walls like a jin
flow magnificant
oxygen hydrogen cells suffcient
steam out the nostral, to raise the ambience
move with precistance
swim the nile Egyptian
as it was written

information, on walls to glide like hawks
ceen from above, as below thoughts talk
those who contest get outlined in chalk
to the sea im like Noah and Ark
to 7 heavens i errupt words to embark
those who pick up, caught the spark
thats 9 levels for your mind to settle
days turn to night as we struggle
the internal, eternal life is understandable
as we enter the Solstice the earth wobble
captured by nasa Hubble
some got caught in the matrix mind scuffle
this whole world we were living in was just a bubble

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cousinsoren commented on World within a world

06-09-2009

A virtue of surealistic art is that it affords the onlloker or critic the liberty to interpret as he or she feels or sees , and not as the exponent of surrealistic art sees or feels, that is if he or she undersatnds what the surrelistic artist feels or sees. The metrica

PrinceSam360

06/09/2009

respect, much love . indeed there are bubbles, inner and outter layers.

cousinsoren commented on World within a world

06-09-2009

This i a good piece of surrealism. Surrealististic artt is often seen as mad art. But one must not be fooled into thinking that a sufrrealistic is usually insane. Their deportment is more often deliberately created as a radical departure from the beaten road of conventions. A virtue of surrealism is tha

cousinsoren

06/09/2009

The metrical mode of this poem suggesting mental turbulence and cynicism is effective, bearing in mind that the ultimate objective of the surrealistic artist is to disturb and to shake the onlooker or critic out of his or her comfort, lassitude and somnolence. Hey! Ignore the typographical errror! Do you agree that "this whole world we are living in was just a bubble? Fitting end to this perfectly good surrealistic jumble. I enjoyed it. Rating" Mad enough and enjoyable enough, impressive and perfect enough to be rated 10+

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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