You Are (to her)

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Love
    • ,
  • Emotional
    • ,
  • My Feelings
    • ,
  • True Love

    Poem Commentary

    "I love you" has become so hackneyed it has lost any real significance. I wanted to translate I love you into other phrases that carried the message more convincingly. How could you say, "I love you more powerfully than; If Aladdin gave me three wishes, I would use all three to wish for you. One of my favorite lines from one of my favorite poems.

    You Are (to her)

     

                                        © by Chuck McGlawn/Chuckest@aol.com

     

                                        Dedicated to all those who want

                                        to say "I love you", and don't know how.

     

                                        You are in all my fairy tales,

                                        You are my lady fair

                                        You are in all my love songs

                                        Singing your deep care

     

                                        You are in all my movies

                                        You are my fem-fatal

                                        You are in all my novels

                                        You are that sexy gal

     

                                        You are the one I hope to see

                                        On a commemorative stamp

                                        You are all three wishes

                                        When I rub Aladdin’s lamp

     

                                        You are what I wish for

                                        As stars shoot ‘cross the sky

                                        You are the face I always see

                                        In the clouds as they drift by

     

                                        You are all these things and more

                                        You are all the dreams I’ve felt

                                        You have changed my real life

                                        You have made my real heart melt.

     

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Apple29 commented on You Are (to her)

    09-04-2012

    That'd be awesome! Will try to do that today. I've got it all in my head, heart and soul...just tryin to do it poetic justice. Thinkin the title needs to include chocolate of some sort, bittersweet of course! :) in order to aptly describe what I was feeling when I read your poem.
    Reply to Comment

    Chuckest

    09/04/2012

    Just write tyour story, I will do the poetic thing.

    Apple29 commented on You Are (to her)

    09-04-2012

    This is such a beautiful poem. Was bittersweet for me as my heart is wondering if he still thinks about me the way you speak of here...Anyway, enough about me; you are a fantastic poet!
    Reply to Comment

    Chuckest

    09/04/2012

    Thank you for your kind remarks. I did a search, and found NO poems written by you. Why? Tell me your "bittersweet " story, and I will write a poem about you.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Chuckest’s Poems (45)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Heart On-Hold 0 09/07/2014
    Just What's A Guy To Do 0 09/07/2014
    Full Circle #2 0 09/07/2014
    Together 0 09/07/2014
    Romance Boards 0 09/07/2014
    If I Loved 0 09/05/2014
    What To Say 0 09/05/2014
    Life Goes On 0 09/05/2014
    You're Our Shining Star 0 09/05/2014
    Will We Ever Learn 0 09/05/2014
    Will We Ever Learn 0 08/21/2014
    Life Should Be More Simple 0 08/21/2014
    You'll Want To Know 0 08/21/2014
    Friends 0 08/21/2014
    Another Day 0 08/21/2014
    Cyber Girl 0 08/21/2014
    On My Mind 0 08/05/2014
    You’re On My Mind 0 08/05/2014
    Did I Ever Tell You 0 08/05/2014
    You Didn’t Even Say Goodbye 0 08/05/2014
    I Think Of You 0 07/07/2014
    E-Mail Mate (for him) 0 07/07/2014
    E-Mail Mate 0 07/07/2014
    If I Had The Words 0 07/07/2014
    I Miss Being Wanted 0 07/07/2014
    We'll Finally Meet 0 07/07/2014
    If I Had Known 0 07/07/2014
    You're For Me 0 07/07/2014
    Dreamings 0 07/07/2014
    Are We A “WE” Of Destiny? 1 09/14/2012
    Full Circle #1 0 09/12/2012
    She Misses Being Wanted 0 09/09/2012
    You'd Know 0 09/09/2012
    You Are the Special One For Me 0 09/08/2012
    Tomorrow Will Be My “Last” Good-bye 0 09/07/2012
    You Are My One 1 09/06/2012
    It’s Over 0 09/06/2012
    You’ve Touched Me 0 09/04/2012
    I’m In Heaven 2 09/04/2012
    What Do You See In Me? 1 09/04/2012
    Dreamer’s Dream 0 09/03/2012
    You Are (to her) 2 09/03/2012
    Time For The Highway 0 09/02/2012
    Elusive Dove 0 10/05/2009
    My Heart's So Full 1 10/04/2009
    Top of Page