You ask why

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    You ask why

    Please tell me...........
    Tell me of a murder
    Of the sweetest taste of blood,
    I begged, I pleaded on my knees
    I was willing to sell this soul that lived in me
    Only to have loves arms embrassing my body once again
    To have for mine
    He has returened to love,
    My Love
    And as he he comes near
    My knife shall pierce through his beating heart
    My hands will be covered in my lovers blood...
    He will fall in my arms
    He will, with all his streangh ask
    One question
    The very one i begged to know the answer to....
    Why?
    Why my Love?
    And I will have No answer

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    RJK commented on You ask why

    01-17-2010

    The question this poem ask's, Why? Love from the heart and why from the brain. Their is the massive problem. Love has no logic it can not understand. Love only feels. The mind can not feel it can only ask the question. Reason is the midle man. But when reveng is in your eyes the end is usualy knowing the loss in your heart, your mind once knew. Or something like that. Good poem.
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    henryb3 commented on You ask why

    05-21-2009

    VERY DEEP.LOVE IS DEEP.LOVE IS RELENTLESS.LOVE CAN BE FOREVER.LOVE CAN BE HERE TODAY AND GONE TOMORROW.LOVE HURTS.YOUR DESCRIPTION OF LOVE IS INSPIRING TESTIMONEY TO THE TRUTH OF LOVE.I LOVE YOUR POEM.EXELENT.
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