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    You

    My mind is goin crazy.
    My thoughts are hazy.
    Thinking of you makes me wonder.
    But all i hear is thunder.
    Your name running through my head all day.
    My heart is saying no way.
    Time passing us by no matter how hard we try.
    I want you in my life.
    The thought seems so far away.
    I try so hard to make it happen.
    But at the same time i fel like snappin.
    The pain that i feel when you say my name and then i awake.
    Just to realize that its all a day dream.

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    Drivingczar commented on You

    03-18-2009

    Your words make a fantasy seem real!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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