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    Darkness fell faster than rain and June came quicker than may
       October was filled with tears from September and march argued so much in December
    maybes came in a month called august and leaves from heaven's trees came down in autumn
      Spring broke out many secrets about July, and fall slipped out like tears from gentry's eyes
    paths closed down in winter as doorways opened up in the summer
     April had a conversation to finish with sagittarius, but he argued with Libra about something he heard from Aries
     Virgo disappeared with Pisces, as Aquarius ran away leaving Taurus in pieces
    Anger was a letter away from leaving with danger,
       and madness realized his true side when he thought about her leaving him for a stranger
      happiness had cried over sadness so much that it drove away joy and gladness.
    True was no longer loyal and real was no longer true,
       while everybody was falling out with the nobodys...i was falling in love with you.

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    willieg commented on YOU

    09-30-2009

    wow.......if only that was too me.........incredible

    BraveMoon commented on YOU

    06-27-2009

    . oh, yes.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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