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God how you stir up my mind
not intrusive
yet painful
I sometimes think you know of your cruelty
yet fight for your innocence
all knowing ignorance
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07-04-2009
- Well, well, well. I think I understand 4/22 a lettle better after reading this one. Do you think you could combine elements of both and make a new poem? This one has more power because it has more concrete things in it, like mentioning cruelty, innocence, and ignorance. Keep up with your writing.
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