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its just a poem i wrote during class...tell me what you think...

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Your eyes are like diamonds
sparkling in the night
decending from heaven, i saw a heavenly glow
this was truly an amazing sight
i stand in awe
amazed by your perfection
i sit in a chair, hoping to myself
that you would come in my direction

you walk towards me
as im still stuck in a daze
your voice is like a siren's song
for it soothes all of my rage
i wish to dance with you
gliding gently under the starry night
looking into your eyes, i saw a sign of peace
for i dont want to say goodbye

i want to get to know you better
i want you in my world
im attracted to you in so many ways
for you not just any girl...

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Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

SHSLegendNate’s Poems (11)

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