A Feeble Attempt

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    A Feeble Attempt

    My love is like a raindrop,

    falling on a flower's soft petal.

    It's strength can penetrate,

    even amalgamate the most durable metal.


    The alms of my love are endless,

    and you accept them with endeavor.

    When I ask for a humble return of my feelings

    your actions are empty and not the leat bit clever.



    I concede my hurt and my pain in order to soothe your needs.

    Your selfishness is like a weed, growing

    And chocking my blossom so it can no longer breathe.



    You cannot begin to fathom the depths of my soul.

    My idolatry could captivate and even compliment your role.

    Yet you refute

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    alyna commented on A Feeble Attempt

    10-20-2009

    i would have sayu it i owuld have admit it onlty it is a girl who never lost affection

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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