A Hand

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  • Kity
  • i'm stick between forgiveness and blasphemy, but, can i forgive myself?

A Hand

You torment me, give me shit.
You say I'm worthless, FUCK!
When you have no idea who I am,
What I been through!
My whole life has been one big slump,
Cuts, lumps, and bruses.
Fell got back up, don't know how I did, but, I did it!
This shit is hard to get.
I could be here one day and gone the next.
While you waste your time thinking of how to beat me down,
I'll be there taking it and my time gets closer,
The time I get mine!
You won't give it to I'll earn it!
Opps there it is, I'm in your mind,
You fall, cut, bump, bruse.
My hand comes down to pick you up,
Suprised thought I would kill you right?
I'm not stupid like you,
Will you take it?
Can you talke my hand trust me?
Take my hand and have someone in this world who gives a fuck about you?
Can you handle my friendship?
Can You Love a Stranger who Saved You?

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hoth2o commented on A Hand

08-07-2009

WOW! That was sooo intense. There are times when people need to see and feel what they have done. This really pulled me in. Excellent scribe..

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Kity’s Poems (21)

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Welcome 0
Tears 0
Lost 0
A Hand 1
What to do? 0
The Truth Now Shown 0
My new and better long over dew love 0
Confused oh so Confused 0
The Need To Change 1
LOVE 1
Once Upon A Dream/Love 0
Name in Love 0
On My Own 0
What The F*** Is Wrong WIth You 0
Have You Ever Fallen For Love 0
Broken Inside and Out 2
Reality 2 0
Reality 0
YOU 1
A Promise Kept Before I Die 0
When I Go To Sleep 0