A Journey Of Their Own

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A Journey Of Their Own

As I stare outside and kill time till 6:30 I watch the cars pass and continue their journey on the road

I stare and see the snow fall in such a graceful way

Lands so perfect on the ground and there it stays so white, so pure, untouched by human beings

As I sit here and think I assume the snow flakes each individualized have a journey of their own so short lived

To be melted by a single touch then you get the courageous ones that land and blend in with the rest

I start thinking about my own journey and where it’s leading me

A long journey it’s been thus far I can only imagine it will only continue till the day I die

Would my journey be destroyed by a simple touch or courageous with the rest?

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EbonyQueen48 commented on A Journey Of Their Own

06-10-2009

this is creative, you have a unique imagination, it was a pleasure to read your work, stay encoraged and always write!!!

CharmingPoet commented on A Journey Of Their Own

03-03-2009

that is some deep thoughts

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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