Remember When...

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  • Confusion

    Remember When...

    I remember when there wasn’t a care in the world

    Now all I care about is you

    The breath taking messages, the sweet compliments, what happened?

    I fell hard and that’s my fault and now I can’t seem to get up

    As tears roll down my face I can’t seem to get you off my mind

    Thoughts of last night keep replaying in my mind like a scratched CD

    Did I go about it the right way? Should I of taken a five minute time out?

    I don’t know, it’s not like I can change it now

    As I sit here and become haunted by these thoughts I only come to the conclusion that I’m lost

    Did I take the risk of losing you for good or can we work this out?

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    SaintStoney commented on Remember When...

    06-17-2009

    Very nice. I understand those emotions completely. But all it takes is time dear. But i really like your artistic style. Nice job. Thank you for sharing,

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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