A Life's Mistake

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    A Life's Mistake
    One puff could change life forever
    On sip could do the same
    One stupid little move
    To me seems lame!

    You throw your whole life away
    For that one second in time
    Which could ruin it for you,
    And it change the luck of your prime

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    xxlheart commented on A Life's Mistake

    01-29-2009

    as a dad i love anything that helps and this not only helps but it is a well done rhyming poem. great work!!
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