a love

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    a love

    i had a love one time,or was it just a dream?
    or was it really love? for thats the way it seemed.
    i met him standing on the shore his eyes they met mine.
    but inside his heart,no love for me hed find.
    my love was a mystery,for he never loved me.
    i had a love one time who now lives in the sea.
    Dianne Burnette

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    gameli commented on a love

    05-05-2009

    lovely ,concise i should say too but well said ;-)
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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