“One Moment in Time”

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“One Moment in Time”

If there ever was a place in life where I need to be,
It’s next to you from dusk to dawn; because your love I need
From birth to now I can’t compare anything so fine
All I ask is to know how forever feels with you someday
“One Moment in Time”

Our special dates, the time we take just for us alone
The river walks, the hunting camp and long talks on the phone
The day you fell into the lake, it took my breath away
If not for long life was so kind for just
“One Moment in Time”

Our bubble baths by candlelight, the backrubs in the tub
It wasn’t long before I knew, we were falling in love
You took me into your heart and excepted who I am
When ever I was confused, you helped me understand
As a child I would pray,  send someone just for me
For if this wish was granted, my life would be complete
See, it’s kind of simple, when you ask of the Divine
Believe in what your asking,  then wait upon a sign
For one day you will awaken,  surprised on what you find
Today’s a gift and you’re the reason, the sun is going to shine
“One Moment in Time”

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Saylar commented on “One Moment in Time”

12-02-2009

Nice feeling and flow to your piece, I enjoyed it. If you get a chance, you may want to change "excepted" to "accepted" for proper usage. I like the way you allow the reader to FEEL your feelings! Saylar

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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