African Safari

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  • Erotic
    • nangy
    • after getting a "broken link" message, i am back and it feels good :D

    Poem Commentary

    let your imagination galop freely over this poem.

    African Safari

    Let your hands carry out a gentle coup d’état over my Africa
    let it melt the snow capped peak of Mount Kilimandjaro
    Exposing the moist dark brown Earth beneath
    ready to receive the gift of life flowing from you
    Already the persistent rhythmic waves of pleasure
    pulsate through my Africa
    Their echoes can be heard over the plains of my Serengeti
    Like a drum calling my Africa to move and jive
    to its intoxicating rhythm and persistent beat.
    Oh, how can I resist letting you journey through my Africa.
    Explore my Namib Desert full of ancient wisdom
    and curvaceous sand dunes receptive to the shifting winds
    as it is moulded and shaped to reflect the mood of the wind.
    Sometimes gentle and humble
    and at times passionate and consummate
    demanding complete surrender
    and my Africa’s resistance crumbles.
    Plunge into my Lake Victoria where cool water envelope you
    Finally quenching your thirst and
    the silence is hummed to life by a hummingbird
    beating its wings faster and faster
    while sucking the nectar from my honeysuckle until it
    flows in exuberant abundance.
    The sunset explodes in a spectacular spectrum of colour
    vividly illuminating your Africa

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    wizthom commented on African Safari

    08-12-2009

    this is a masterful poise fill creativity inspired soul up lifting visionary creation a most read over and over to get the beauty in every verse,u are gifted as well as meek,,peace wizthom

    Strider commented on African Safari

    08-12-2009

    Well written and being an African myself I am total proud of you. Great work

    poetikkk commented on African Safari

    08-11-2009

    This trully a nice poem. I live the metaphor of Africa and the sensuality of your images. It is an erotic poem without any crudeness.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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