Love me

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    • nangy
    • after getting a "broken link" message, i am back and it feels good :D

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    ok, this is my second attempt at writing...so be gentle with your comments...feel free to throw stones (gently) that will allow me to bounce back.........thanks for all who left comments before,  love you all (mwah). stay blessed (and energetic)

    Love me

    love me when i least deserve it
    when all you hear are words
    filtered through an unforgiven heart
    and words savagely tear it apart
    when arms are unyieldingly cold; unwelcome,
    but determined to embrace
    when i look at you with eyes dark with accusation
    and makes your heart conceive bitter tears that die on your lips
    love me when i least deserve it
    because thats when i need it most

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    wizthom commented on Love me

    08-12-2009

    very well stated to give love to those who only dish out rejection is like trying to cook on a wind driving flame..wizthom
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    phatdaddee commented on Love me

    08-05-2009

    Wow, after your pre-poem disclaimer I was expecting so much worse but this poem is excellent! Great job Nangy!
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    theladyz commented on Love me

    08-03-2009

    Ah, Nangy, having been on both sides of that equation, I feel you, coming and going. Good expression.
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    keller commented on Love me

    08-01-2009

    that was pretty heavy,i like it alot.but the text could have been a little bigger
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    nangy

    08/03/2009

    thank you thank you thank you...:) (speechless)

    Strider commented on Love me

    07-31-2009

    If anybody gives me the kind of love that you describe, I'll give the person my life. For a second attempt to write poems, you have a 10.
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    nangy

    08/03/2009

    thank you for your comment...thank you...thank you :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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