Again

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In my head

Again

The wind the stars the moon the rain .

My mind my scars my tune my pain.

Alone I find the truths insane.

With time to see inside my brain.

Twisted , Tempted , peaceful , plain.

Beaten , blackened , tainted , stain.

In the darkness voices wain .

To hear them all I must strain.

What they tell me is quite plain .

Don’t miss the boat , or the train .

Life can be a journey , or a stroll down lonely lane.

You may not find the answer , no loss is still no gain.

I’ll say I can’t behave my self , you say I must refrain.

I told you I need a shorter leash , and you a longer cane.

Beat back the fear , excuse my tears ,I’ll try it once again.

The wind the stars the moon the rain.

My mind ,my scars , my tune , my pain

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CMarsh commented on Again

09-21-2009

Great job! If I can make a suggestion the ending doesn't seem closed to me unless that was you intent.I would only add ed to the ending of the word stain for the flow to be consistent.

RJOBOYLE

09/21/2009

thanx but it's just a "n" thng

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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