All Around The World

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It is one thing to disagree in debate of thought. Liberty in human society can exist only when there is separation of church and state and with a constitution the one the United States Has. Any religious faith that introduces the idea of a "choosen people" is introducing trouble and cultural instability to any given civilization, in time. Can their be equality under the law when their exist social Classes? When wealth is the only way you can secure justice for yourself because you can buy the resources you need to defend your self if accused? What is really important in living life? If you take God out of the equation for reason to inspire conflict, Jealously, Greed, Lust and Hatreds are at least bona fide emotional sources for introducing mayhem. It's because of double standards of any kind that every civilization man has built stumbles upon. Can't we just get along?

All Around The World

All around the world I see and hear of pain and great emotions. 
What can cause such great pain; such misery?
Revenge and Jealously, Greed, Lusts and Hatreds;
Alll their intents they are the same.
They are the same!
They are the same!
To poisen,
To poisen,
To posien the spirit 
And essence of Man;
To gring into dust Man's memory 
and all the wonders knowledge and art He has wrought; 
And all the beauty he has fought for.
The liberties he has paid for,
In blood. All in vain.
To destroy and make vain, the human sacrifice to move on and forward;
To destroy to build it all again; In the new image of the god who reigns at the time, in  its terror and tryanny.
We will obey
We will obey
Because WE believe it/she/he is real when they exist only in our mind.
Ah Man, What a wonder, you really Are. 
AH Man, One wonders where you have been and the journey of your existence.
Let God die in to a forgotten memory;
So that we can at last transcend and stand as adults, 
As the gods we are, 
And step beyond, 
HIS healthy grace to that which we have made of our own,
Which is better and more kind.
Revenge and Jealously, Greed Lust and Hatreds; 
all their intents they are the same, they are the same!
These are God's legacy. God's Shame.
All around the world I see and hear of pain and great emotions. 
What can cause such great pain; such misery?
Revenge and Jealously, Greed, Lusts and Hatreds;
All their intents they are the same.
They are the same!
They are the same!
To poisen,
To poisen,
To posien the spirit 
And essence of Man;
To gring into dust Man's memory 
and all the wonders knowledge and art He has wrought; 
And all the beauty he has fought for.
The liberties he has paid for,
In blood. All in vain.
To destroy and make vain, the human sacrifice to move on and forward;
To destroy to build it all again; In the new image of the god who reigns at the time, in  its terror and tryanny.
We will obey
We will obey
Because WE believe it/she/he is real when they exist only in our mind.
Ah Man, What a wonder, you really Are. 
AH Man, One wonders where you have been and what has been the journey of your existence.
Let God die in to a forgotten memory;
So that we can at last transcend and stand as adults, 
As the gods we are, 
And step beyond, 
HIS healthy grace to that which we have made of our own,
Which is better and more kind.
Revenge and Jealously, Greed, Lusts and Hatreds; 
all their intents they are the same, they are the same!
These are God's legacy. God's Shame.

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T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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