alone

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    alone

     i wander alone through time
    never finding the right rhyme
    i don't want to be alone
    wish you would call me on the phone
    i know i made the right choice
    each time i hear the anger in your voice
    you can't come back this time
    i won't listen to your sweet lies
    i will be better off without you
    this much i know is true
    you had your chance and you blew it
    now you want to just throw a fit
    don't blame me for your mistakes
    i took as much as i could take
    remember how i loved you
    but know i am through
    i'll be your friend
    to the bitter end
    lover i will no more be
    i am taking care of me

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    RoseFromARose commented on alone

    09-07-2010

    I really like how strong you were in your choice that it was over no matter how bad you didn't want to be alone. It's the right choice. Wonderful
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    yayaya commented on alone

    07-10-2009

    i applaud this. amazing. it makes me wonder of the story behind this. great poem
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    MrGee commented on alone

    07-09-2009

    I see you like to rhymn. I also like to rhymn. And my i suggest you read some of Percy Shelly poems. now back to your poem. it paints an excellent picture and it reflects your power of Self. Good work. And if you get a chance read my poem entitled Nefer.
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    tiffiny26

    07/09/2009

    thank you so much and i will read yours too...

    WinterFrost commented on alone

    07-09-2009

    well you truly do epitomize the damaged lover. Nice poem.
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    scrye commented on alone

    07-09-2009

    Such talent i am in awe of you girl this almost brought tears to my eyes and i'm a stone cold witch. Great work, such art. Another 10 from me.
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    tiffiny26

    07/09/2009

    wow... tears to your eyes... didn't think i was that good, but thank you for all your support... it means a lot

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