Am I

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Am I

Am I
By:Charles Pugh

Am I still your everything, your heart your soul

Do I still light your heart when inside your dark and cold

Am I still the one who makes you strong

who gives you the strength and will to hold on

when the stress in life begins to build

Am I still your protector, your knight, your armor,

and your shield

Do you still love me like you used to

Do you still believe that we can make it though

Am I still the king of your castle

If you had to fight for our love would you prepare for battle

Will you love me no matter what

Can you promise me on us you will never give up

I’ll love you til the day I die and that’s no bluff

So hold on and do let go

Tell me Am I really worth fighting for

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hdmac commented on Am I

06-27-2009

Strange poem. There are a couple cliches in your poem. It does'nt seem like you really paid attention to them and they take away from the originality of your work.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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