An Ending

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i wrote this poem after my ex broke up with me.

An Ending

I hate this feeling of hurt

a looming presence of love

as it takes hold of my soul

fear and confusion becoming my breath

not able to break this last hold

i cry out my sanity

praying for a bit of humanity

watching my heart slip away

yet i am still whole

once i am free i'll be in peace

then will i truelly be me

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Angel197038 commented on An Ending

07-03-2009

I truly love this write as it reminds me of not only what I have been through but also what my best friend is going through and you are so very right in every word that you state here! I love your honesty and flow of this write. Thanks for sharing....hugs and God Bless, Helen

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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