AN INCOMPLETE IDEA

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    AN INCOMPLETE IDEA

    I used to think we once belonged,
    In a universe we’ve called our own,
    Where stars played and the planets roam,
    The sun never sets and the moon stands alone,

    My heart was in orbit around your soul,
    But when we revolved our love turned cold,
    And now we’ve lost our pot of gold,
    In a dark sea with a treacherous hold,

    We tried an impossibly hard reach
    Searching through an orifice so deep,
    who knows where our love would be,
    Ending in an idea so incomplete,

    Into the darkness returns the light,
    Because our courage conquered the fight,
    and once again our love ignites,
    Into a blazing fiery plight,

    Trapped inside this burning feat,
    Feeling the intensity of heat,
    Trickle down, rising beneath,
    The idea of love so incomplete,

    Bursting through a thunderous cloud,
    Forever determined to be found,
    Left abandoned on island grounds,
    A vicious cycle turning around,

    Now uninvited memories float,
    Back to where our amenities broke,
    Leaving behind all of our hope,
    No sunshine, no rain, just love on a boat,

    Solemnly drifting away on the sea,
    Not wanting to fade and resisting to leave,
    Finding a way to exists and believe,
    How an idea ended so incompletely.

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    Tuts commented on AN INCOMPLETE IDEA

    08-04-2009

    The waves and tides of love are in constant motion. Very nice piece thanks for sharing.

    Phoenix9 commented on AN INCOMPLETE IDEA

    03-11-2009

    such talent, keep writing pls

    NayInLove commented on AN INCOMPLETE IDEA

    02-17-2009

    I feel everything that you write! you are very talented! good job :)

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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