Reminisced

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    Reminisced

    Listening to the soulful sounds of Dwele,
    Keeps me in a trance, mind, soul and body,
    Awakens my spirit with and earthly passion,
    But with smooth movements in an orderly fashion,
    Emotions return and are embraced once again,
    Maybe because we can’t ever be friends,
    So I’m left to just dream of you being around,
    Until rescued from this estranged lost and found,
    Why do I miss someone who has done me wrong,
    When he doesn’t think of me no matter how time goes on,
    Should he forget all the love spent on us,
    Leaving me alone and too terrified to trust,
    Scorned,
    but in the shadow stands one trying to love me,
    But I can’t erase the thought of you holding on in memory,
    Cause everything’s,
    reminding me,
    of all the ways we used to breathe,
    Together,
    Apart and in Between,
    Its like our hearts were meant to beat,
    in sync
    And we
    Destined to be,
    together
    Once upon a happily,
    But never,
    Made it,
    to that dream,
    We broke-up and faded,
    so it seems,
    Useless to try,
    Something denied,
    I’ve learned to accept the teary eyed,
    Found that its much better to discreetly hide,
    The existence of you deep within my mind,
    Captivating your essence until the end of all time,
    When you are ready to be lost I’ll be waiting here to find

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    CaramelProse commented on Reminisced

    07-25-2009

    You have more than a 'knack'; you have a natural flow, your words pull and don't let go...this will have me thinking; I'm sure you already know...

    Phoenix9 commented on Reminisced

    03-11-2009

    deserving of so much more than mere feathers

    dahlusion commented on Reminisced

    03-04-2009

    "When you are ready to be lost I’ll be waiting here to find" —— this is a masterful arrangement of words. Powerful piece!

    jazzbury commented on Reminisced

    02-23-2009

    Beautiful Dear Very nice Stay sweet

    bforibus commented on Reminisced

    02-23-2009

    this poem is on fire

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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