aTHE LOVE OF A KING FOR HIS QUEEN

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    aTHE LOVE OF A KING FOR HIS QUEEN

    TO YOU THE ONE I DREAM OF                                                    TO YOU THE ONE I SEE A BEAUTIFUL IFUTURE WITH ..... TO YOU THE ONE I IREALLY WANT AND NEED IN THIS NEW LIFE.......   BABY  BEING WITHOUT YOU IS NOT THE SAME....... AND  DREAMING OF THE GEORGOUS DAYS WE'VE  HAD AND WILL HAVE.. YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE I NEED AND TRUELY WANT.....BUT SWEETHEART TOGETHER WE'RE STRONGER...      ..AND TOGETHER WE CAN OVERCOME CHALLENGES. BUT MOST OF ALL TOGETHER WE ARE WHOLE...... SAY THE QUEEN OF MY LIFE...WE CAN AND WILL ACHIEVE AND MOVE MOUNTANS AS ONE.... AND WE ALWAYS NEW FROM THE VERY FIRST MOMENT THAT WE NEED EACH OTHER TO STAY STRONG..... AND AS ONE THE INCREDIBLE CAN AND WILL BE REACHED.... BABY WE ARE REMARKABLE TOGETHER.....AND  AS ONE WE MAKE EACH OTHER SO VERY SPECIAL....NO MATTER WHAT,, NO ONE CAN TAKE THIS LOVE WE SO STRONGLY SHARE AWAY......BECAUSE IT IS HERE TO STAY AND SO AM I......    ILL LOVE YOU MY QUEEN FOREVER........AND EVER......    AND THIS IS A KINGS LOVE FOR HIS LOVELY QUEEN             YOUR KING                                   RICHARD C WILKERSON JR.

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    SpiritSong commented on aTHE LOVE OF A KING FOR HIS QUEEN

    07-17-2009

    Nice! yes there are a few easily fixable editing errors like.. AND WE ALWAYS(( NEW)) FROM THE VERY FIRST MOMENT THAT WE NEED EACH OTHER TO STAY. Should be ((KNEW)) ..and IFUTURE should be just FUTURE..and a few more type'O errors in the piece. But the thought came across true and warm and honest, thank you nekosuave...nice!

    susanismith commented on aTHE LOVE OF A KING FOR HIS QUEEN

    07-15-2009

    I felt the yearning for his queen...the love and the power they have when they are together...the weakness that is shown when he without her...beautifully done.

    causeofbalance commented on aTHE LOVE OF A KING FOR HIS QUEEN

    07-14-2009

    got a little editing problems that are easily fixable, but the poem is not bad. I personally am not huge into love/romance poems, but i like your line "most of all together we are whole." i think one can take that outside just one human relationship and expand it to even humanity, all other organisms, the planet, cosmos, galaxy, universe, etc.. keep up the good work!!

    nekosuave

    07/14/2009

    thank you very much i will work on the next one and do a better job of writting it this is my first poem ever sumitted to anyone so i have more to come glad you liked it

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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