Back to the arms of the Creator

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    • I have been very ill. But I'm back.

    Back to the arms of the Creator

    Back to the arms of the Creator

     

    Taronis-2004

     

    Autumn winds, a cool sun, as the summer strength bids its last

    I see the sun lower each day, darkness spreads over the light

    Dreams of days, sweet and warm, days that have rapidly past

    Glimmers on dark-speckled waters of youth that could not endure

    I see those days, long-ago, pleasant, yet now somehow obscured

    Tainted in the worry of darkness beckoning, the glow’s final task

    The greens to ambers and wind-swept reds, time lacking, one last look

    As the brightness passes over long-away hills, a single shaft of daylight

    Casts long shadows toward the east, as twilight falls, as summer passes

    Beckoned homeward my worn-out soul, back to the arms of the Creator

     

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    rossmangeles commented on Back to the arms of the Creator

    06-27-2009

    Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, in the end we shall be "back to the arms of the Creator". Very nice piece. I love it. cheers!

    cousinsoren commented on Back to the arms of the Creator

    06-25-2009

    Too reflectively and introspectively sublime to be somewhat prosaic. Its essence becomes obscured in prose. I suggest that ta transform these profound sentences into a poetic mode. Ta, let's see you rework this profound and beautifully crafted piece for better appeal to our senses.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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