Blushing Urges of a Teen

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    Blushing Urges of a Teen

     Blushing Urges of a Teen

    Taronis -- 04

     

    I saw your exquisite sun tanned flesh

    Dripping, shivering, after your splash

    I saw you walk and shake less sodden

    Oh the image stays with me unforgotten

     

    I saw your long and subtle limbs

    As you shaved them soft and pink

    Then you saw me and quietly smiled

    Soap and lake water in a flirting trickle

     

    As you smiled I did not go

    By your smile you invited my attention

    Lurid urges I had back then

    Watching your hair in that summer wind

     

    Though we never spoke that day

    You knew what I thought and would not say

    I dared not stand in your full view

    Tight drawn shorts wet with dew

     

    It took me days to speak your name

    It took me hours my loins to tame

    But I took that step in an August rain

    And spoke to you just the same

     

     

     

     

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    ginga commented on Blushing Urges of a Teen

    12-23-2009

    ta, The subject matter is alluring. The fact the man gets up his courage to finally approach the woman is gallant. Chivalry is not dead! A 10+ from me. I have 2 posts that are a similar genre to this poem if you care to read them :" Be With Me" and"Touch." ginga
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    susanismith commented on Blushing Urges of a Teen

    07-28-2009

    Your words were well played...loving the tease throughout the read...anticipating what the next step is...it definitley drew me in and flowed smoothly like a song... Thank you.
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    ta

    12/22/2009

    thanks :)

    wheelsal commented on Blushing Urges of a Teen

    06-25-2009

    This is poetry perfection. How have I missed you before this............................................
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    cousinsoren commented on Blushing Urges of a Teen

    06-25-2009

    Thix is a lyrical jewel. Rhyming scheme is perfect. Musicality and imagery exquisitely sustained by effectively chosen monosyllabic words which breathes sincerity of admiration and adoration throughout the entire poem. Rating 10+
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    ta

    06/25/2009

    ozzy ozborne will set it to music....lol

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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