Be Content

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This a simple poem that came to me while I was thinking of something of short and sweet to write. It's easy be happy with what God gave you. We all work together for the greater good. You can't go to a car mechanic for a heart transplant. You can't go the dentist and get a haircut. God made us different for a reason, and the reason is beautiful just look around you.

Be Content

Be Content

 

Winter said to spring, “the world likes you better”

 

Spring said to summer, “I wish God made me a warmer weather”

 

Summer said to them both, “I wish I could bloom like Fall”

 

Fall had no complaints; she knows God made them all

 

 

Written and Constructed by: Jamie J. Robinson

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tsgirl commented on Be Content

06-18-2009

r u James, if so you're good, just the way I like them short and nice. very artistic

godsangel103

07/13/2009

THANK YOU MY NAME IS JAMIE I APPRECIATE YOUR INPUT THANK YOU!!! GOD BLESSS!!

blkplum35 commented on Be Content

06-18-2009

I like this, it was to the point and made perfect sense.

godsangel103

07/13/2009

THANK YOU I APPRECIATE IT!!! ITS AWESOME TO GET FEEDBACK GOD BLESS!!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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