Black Road To Heaven

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just a quicky, no inspiration really...but it pretty much has the same meaning as the "devil hides in chocolate" not only is there an evil in innocent looking people, but there is an evil in almost all innocent thing...The term "follow the dark" is a way pointing out if we can not see the things we lust and desire, that sparkle like fire, it would be easier not go go near them...when the kid has sight for a moment and sees all the golden wonders, he sees all that and feels the want for what he has hated his whole life...or has envied in a sense...like i said it was just a quicky try not to think too much about it

Black Road To Heaven

The tale of a blind male
Who saw the world pale
And was quick to rebel and linger

His mind was his jail
No escape no prevail
Wore the purity ring on his middle finger

All his thoughts of all lies
Led him quick to despise
Of the world and its spiteful decisions

We have fought for our lives
Now we live with the flies
Is this what God has envisioned

For a seond too late
He saw the world and its hate
The vision got clearer and clearer
He saw anger and fire, lust and desire.
Soon realized he was looking at a mirror.

The fire is in us
The fire will win us
If we cannot see its spark

The fire is everywhere
No escape no prevail
If you dont follow the dark

The blind man has seen gods wonderful sign
The world will leave eachother behind
The blind man has strength, with the training of mind
Now he is glad he is blind




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FranzJ commented on Black Road To Heaven

09-07-2010

if we all could see the hate (I can't undrstand why) in the world and work to elemate it - how grand would that be

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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