Blade

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    Blade
    Always wanting to escape
    wanting something so new,
    a release from anguish and pain
    to just get away from myself,
    not to want that rush
    the one you get from shedding blood,
    to slice a vein and let it flow
    to release it before I explode,
    dying on the inside but it doesn't show
    my smile fools the ones who should know,
    my trusty razor, my one true friend
    never leaves me, here to the bitter end,
    my scars are the only things that are left now
    if I make it through this, it'll be amazing,
    I need to break away from this addiction
    the need of pain affliction,
    self-torture, bringing the pain to the surface
    ignoring the pain deep within,
    why must I hurt myself?
    why can't I just let go?
    letting go of all the pain scares me
    because without it, nothing would be left of me.

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    Tarlton009 commented on Blade

    09-20-2009

    you are a great poet I love your work, I can feel the emotion and pain in the words, I would like to offer an aternative, a rehab program if you will, I drug that doesn't sting or cause you pain. but a drug that can heal anything....you want to know more....email me.
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    Jade84

    09/21/2009

    For one I don't need a rehab program, I haven't cut in 3 years, this poem was back from when I was going through a rough time and a way to express myself, I do appreciate your concert and compliment, thank you and Blessed Be.

    Tarlton009 commented on Blade

    09-20-2009

    there is an answer to your problems let the mystery dissolve for there is a God who loves you and your problems he can solve I know you think this petty but I becon you to stay listen to the words from him and from your sorrows stray life is hard and bitter sometimes its hard to see but there is one who offers hope, salvation, and eternaty Peace can be yours if you only seek it put your faith in Christ and see if it fits If you want to talk about anything at all, please email me butterflymarjoire@hotmail.com
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    WordSlinger commented on Blade

    03-02-2009

    I need to break away from this addiction, and keep writing
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    muttman1 commented on Blade

    02-04-2009

    consider yourself a true poet
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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