Blooms in the meadow


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    i will write till the blooms die

    Blooms in the meadow

    Softer than the clouds
    after a misty rain in the field
    i walk amongst the grass
    my fingers wanting to reveal

    smell of life
    doubt in the my heart
    feelings of hope
    for this day i dont want to start

    the life beneath me
    earth and rain
    its existence short lived
    for all its beauty remains

    I see the future
    my beauty inside me
    will I be forever cherished
    will i be there to see

    The blooms of today
    with hopes and doubts of life
    gone tomorrow in the wind
    will make the fields to strive

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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