Blunt

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    Blunt

    Stunt or shunt baby dont be so blunt.
    you rave you bich you hide and hunt,
    get off my grass and wash your front.
    Blu or Nero take the punt,
    dont come back til your not so blunt.

    Hate me Love me non to me,
    just keep blunt shut and coo we be.
    Run your Blu and down you go,
    see you sled into the Joe.
    Nero punts as blunt as you,
    go back to Joe and rule your own.

    Stunt or shunt dont be so blunt
    you freakin hide you surely hunt.
    Get off my grass, and take the punt,
    go wash your Blu dont be so blunt.

    Take it on to Nero punk,
    front or back it isnt sunk.
    Until Blu runs its blunt to Joe,
    Wash your front, away you go.

    Stunt or shunt dont be  so blunt,
    you rave you bich you hide you hunt.
    get off my grass and wash your front.
    Blu or Nero take the punt,
    dont come back til your not so blunt.

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    EinStud commented on Blunt

    09-03-2009

    "...you hide you hunt." is really a cool line that says a lot. This is dark poetry. I only know this from the feeling I get, not what I see or read with my brain. But still, it is very intriguing. Jiminy you are like a wild maverick just out of the gate kicking hard and not sure how long the ride will last? But one thing is for sure, it is a wild ride you provide! EinStud

    jiminyCRITiX

    09/04/2009

    Thanks Einstud.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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