The wait

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    The wait

     At the end of the day
    I wait for love
    I wait for happiness
    I wait for you

    When I drive home from work
    I look for love
    I look for happiness
    I look for you

    Wait and look
    look and wait
    it seems
    its all I ever do

    At the end of the day
    when I am waiting for you
    I look for the love
    that I once knew

    When I drive home from work
    and I am looking for you
    I wait for the happiness
    between me and you

    Where are you
    when I sit here and wait
    are you looking for love
    are you out on a date

    my mind is racing
    my tears have been shed
    should I stop waiting for love
    should I move on instead

    wait and look
    and hope for you
    If I stop waiting
    what else can I do


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    SavVySam commented on The wait

    02-22-2010

    Another nice one jiminy! You have a neat knack for language and word usage! Well done!
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    EinStud commented on The wait

    02-15-2010

    You can leave, and wait on someone else? But then that doesn't solve the problem either, I guess. Of course you could go lesbian. Then you will have a partner who feels exactly like you do...
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