brick wall girl

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    brick wall girl

    A little child naïve, wondering what’s going on
    A little girl lost, singing a sad song
    A game of tug-o-war, this is her real life
    So young to be feeling the pain of grief and strife
    The yelling and the cursing, the spitting in the face
    Early signs of hatred anger and disgrace
    Tears soak the pillow, every night they occur
    No one seems to notice, no one can comfort her
    She learns to hide her feelings, shield them from the world
    She becomes a tough cookie, no longer a little girl
    What could seem to cause this, to make this girl so sad
    The separation of two people, her beloved mom and dad
    -JAM-

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    Phoenix9 commented on brick wall girl

    01-21-2009

    all to often its the children that suffer for our mistakes, very well done,JAM

    brijodajac commented on brick wall girl

    01-21-2009

    an honest reply to an event no one should have to go through. I remember very little of the fights, but remember enough to know my dad was never there

    bforibus commented on brick wall girl

    01-21-2009

    i can feel the pain. i dont necessarily remember when my father left but i feel the lost everyday. very gud poem

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