the depths of love

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    the depths of love

    You and me, that’s how it should be
    That’s all that makes sense in the world
    You and me, should carve our initials in a tree
    You’re my man and I’m your girl
    Destiny told you “She’s right over there”
    And down from the skies Cupid flew
    How hard he’d shoot, we were unaware
    But at that moment I fell hard for you
    Heels over Head and Head over Heels
    Butterflies, rainbows and pure white doves
    Words can’t form the way I feel
    Or tell how deep and strong is my love
    Without you I’m inadequate
    Things don’t make sense anymore
    Walking around I feel out of it
    You’re the only one I adore
    You are the completion of my being
    With you I’m in a euphoric state
    A life without you isn’t worth seeing
    In us, my love, I have unconditional faith

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    Jedi4Jesus commented on the depths of love

    06-23-2009

    Awesomely lovey dovey. May your love take you for a joyful ride.

    rossmangeles commented on the depths of love

    06-23-2009

    Indeed, falling in love is a wonderful feeling. I enjoyed your expression of how to fall in love. I simply enjoy the poem. It makes me smile.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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