broken heart

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    • abbyownzemos
    • has anyone read Allen Ginsberg? he is so incredible!! it makes me ashamed to call myself a poet!!

    broken heart

    im living a nightmare
    with every passing day
    i lose touch with reality
    my sanity is slipping away
    the pain i've caused
    it can't be true
    all the damage i have done to you
    and with every break of your heart
    i slit my wrist, the sikn i cut apart
    the pain is bitter-sweet
    as all pain can be
    forever a part of my heart you will always be
    your my best best friend
    and i love you so
    but you are just my brother
    i had to let you go
    the last thing i wanted was to break your heart
    and for you to completely fall apart
    my brother it is simple
    as simple as can be
    there nothing i can say
    except im verry sorry

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    ManOnTheMoon commented on broken heart

    11-03-2010

    Great write, full of emotions and a story felt by many. 10 from me.

    sorcererofmagic commented on broken heart

    05-05-2009

    forgiveness.

    dark0 commented on broken heart

    05-01-2009

    wow damn that's a wow i'm i'm speachless

    SEVEN commented on broken heart

    04-27-2009

    aw that poor thing... what u do to him? well atleast u put it to words how sorry u feel...

    tmac07 commented on broken heart

    04-24-2009

    You get the readers attention....what i like about your poetry is that you make a person think and while reading i can actually draw a picture of what your saying... i like that

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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