BROOKLYN-CLIP

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  • Lost Love

    BROOKLYN-CLIP

    U MADE ME MEAN,U DROVE ME INSANE .
    TO THE POINT OF NO RETURN.I GAVE YOU MY HEART.
    EVEN AFTER WE DEPARTED WAYS.THE PAIN THAT I CARRIED,
    SCARRED ME TO THE BONE.
    I HATE WHO I BECOME,YET AM COMFORTABLY NUMB.
    TIME TO CALL OVER MY BEST FRIEND "HENNESSEY & RUM."
    WHEN YOU CHOCKED ME DID IT TURN YOU ON?
    WHEN YOU WHIPPED ME WHICH DID YOU PERFER
    USING CANES OR CORDS?
    YOU WERE CONFIDENT I WOULDNT CALL THE COPS,
    OH YOU KNEW ME SO WELL.ONLY TIME WOULD TELL.
    DID PICASSO INSPIRE YOU TO COVER ME IN BLACK & BLUE?
    MY VISION WAS ALWAYS BLURRY,MY SPEECH SLURRY.
    "HURRY UP & HEAL ALREADY"
    BLA BLA HOORAY GUESS I HAD IT COMING.
    FOR OLD AND FOR NEW.
    GOD WILL DEAL WITH YOU.
    MY HEART BEAT IS SLOWING DOWN.
    ALL I SEE IS WHITE LIGHT.
    GUESS MY TIME ENS TONIGHT.
    I WENT OUT WITH A FIGHT. GOODNIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    LIFECHANGES commented on BROOKLYN-CLIP

    06-06-2009

    This poem is on target of abuse in this world today...it grabs u from the start. i'm going 2 ad this as a fav. Good peice!!!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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    TOO REAL!!!!!!!!!
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