TICK TOCK

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    well it is what it is and thats it

    TICK TOCK

     i've been watching you with two blind eyes

    listening to their cries that fall upon my deaf ears

    i feel their pain through my paralized limbs

    i am a prisoner in this so called land of the free

    i walk amongst the dead who believe their living

    i curse my fathers name in vain outloud

    while in silence i beg for His forgiveness

    i hold onto hope and faith knowing it's alll i have left

    i work hand to mouth for a woman who left me long ago

    they say promise is a comfort to a fool i am the idiot

    i reminsce on what was and loose focus on what is

    i am infected with a virus that plagued my common sense

    time keeps ticking but my life stands still

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    Paleidia commented on TICK TOCK

    07-16-2009

    WOW! This is great! What can I say? I love it! 10 from me!
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