NEWS AT 5

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THIS IS NOT ONLY IN FOREIGN COUNTRIES MODER DAY SLAVERY IS HERE WHAT WILL IT TAKE FOR US TO PUT OUR FOOT DOWN

NEWS AT 5

PUT YOUR FINGER ON THE TIME WHEN IT ALL BEGAN

SEX WAS ALWAYS A FORM OF CARDINAL SIN


A VIRGIN BLEEDS FROM HOLY MATRIMONY ON HER WEDDING
NIGHT

TO SOME IT'S A SIGN OF EVIL TO OTHERS IT'S A RITUAL

THESMELL OF CLOTTED AND REPRESSED NIGHTS OF DESIRE AND WANTED PLEASURE

FREEZE THE AIR ABOVE LEAVING HER BREATHLESS FIGHTING FOR LIFE


COVERED FROM HEAD TO TOE WITH ONLY A TINY HOLE FOR PUNISHMENT

THE BASIS ALL COVERED   THE RULES ARE SET AND PASSED DOWN FROM GENERATION TO GENERATION

FORBIDDEN THOUGHTS CORRODE AND MANIFEST IN HER SPONGE LIKE MIND

ABSORBING ALL THE PAIN AND BRUTAL TONGUE LASHINGS FROM THE MOTH OF HER MASTER


SCARED TO LLOK AT HIM IN THE EYES SHE WALKS WITH HER HEAD DOWN

TRIPPING ON REGRETS OF THINGS SHE WILL NEVER KNOW

A VISION OF BEAUTY LOST AMONGST A COWARDS FAITH

CONTROLLED BY A POLITICAL MINDLESS MIND OF A MAD MAN

FREEDOM IS A WORD SHE WILL NEVER KNOW UNTIL SHE DIES

YET WE WATCH THIS ON T.V AT NIGHT AND DON'T EVEN BATTER OUR EYES

REALIZE THIS IS OUR SISTER OUR MOTHER OUR DAUGHTER

SILENTLY PLEADING FOR OUR HELP

OPEN YOUR HEARTS AND YOUR MINDS AND DON'T LET IT FADE AWAY

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Busgoddess commented on NEWS AT 5

07-01-2009

Thanks for saying it loud and proud sister! in the Zombie like way it all continues to go about, the world spinning out of control. It's good to vent in a constructive way. I like your words.

danmartyjake1 commented on NEWS AT 5

07-01-2009

Identifies some harsh realities that exist for women. Heartbreaking and genuine.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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TICK TOCK 1
NEWS AT 5 2
PRODUCT OF A DISEASED MIND 0
STREET DREAMS 0
GHETTO MENTALITY 0
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO ME 0
LISTEN 0
TWO SHOES/PRESTON 0
REALITY:DEAD WOMAN TALKING 0
DEAR BRANDY 0
TILL DEATH DO US PART 0
LULLABYE 0
NOTE TO SELF 0
SAYS WHO? 0
CONSTIPATED COMTEMPLATED 2
EMERGENCY 911 0
SHIT OUTTA LUCK 2
TALE OF THE HOES 1
ARE YOU WORKING FOR THE MAN? 1
LIMELIGHT 0
DO THE MATH 0
BROOKLYN-CLIP 1
PRACTICE WHAT YOU PREACH 0
NOTE TO SELF 0
TOO REAL!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!
1
WELCOME TO MY WORLD 0
A MILE IN MY SHOES 0
NIGHTMARE IN FEDERAL PRISON 0