brown eyes

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  • Pain

    brown eyes

     brown eyes
    tell me why you cry
    sing me a song today
    your voice the violin...

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    HandsofCrimson commented on brown eyes

    05-28-2009

    This is so quaint, yet beautiful... I really love your choice of words MAL.... It is funny your voice the violin... i believe that the only instrument in the world that can truly sound like crying is the violin. Anyway Brown Eyes? what color are yours? lost love's eyes? makes one think. Beautiful
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    dahlusion commented on brown eyes

    05-26-2009

    This is so beautiful, I can not begin to explain it in words, simply and poetically pure, creative, masterful.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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