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    unknown
    Going Forward towards a light.. beginning or ending...status: unknown... i do not understand... the "under"statement of the year.. it's beneath me... But i am drowning underneath salt-water... provided that my tears are on cue tonight (as always)... Bowing as yer applause grows louder.. for quite a show i have put on... please provide me with a script... for thoughts inside my heart change memorized lines... that like FIRE burn my tounge... with every word "un"spoken...

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    dahlusion commented on unknown

    05-22-2009

    "provided that my tears are on cue tonight (as always)" —— this line is original-absolute. Perfectly poetic!
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    HandsofCrimson commented on unknown

    05-21-2009

    your sense of sarcasm and twisting of words I think is wonderful... I can not wait to read more of your stuff. I love the Status Unknown..... it just makes perfect sense to me.
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